Today I made an origami swan, it was really nice. I was able to sell my swans for five pesos each. here is the link to the website so you can make it too. Origami Player
"Today I made an origami swan in was really nice" should be two sentences.
"I was able to sell them for five pesos each." "Them" refers to a plural noun. What noun is this referring to? You never mentioned any plural nouns before this. Do you mean "it"?
What is wrong with this sentence: "here is the link I got to teach me how to make it"?
You will need cornstarch, sunflower oil and hand soap or body wash, food coloring is optional. First in a big bowl mix together 1/2 cup of cornstarch. Then 3 tablespoons of sunflower oil and hand soap or body wash. Now add the food coloring. Just keep mixing till it does not stick to your hands. Now to use it as soap just grab a bit, then rub it on your hands till its really bubbley, then rinse.
Daedalus was jealous of his nephew and murdered him. As punishment Daedalus was banished from Atheris and made his way to Crete. Daedalus became the technical adviser for the king at Crete. The king’s wife, Pasiphae, was cursed by Poseidon to fall in love with the king’s bull. Under the spell she asked Daedalus, to help her. Daedalus made a hollow wooden cow, so realistic to fool the bull. While Pasiphae hiding in the cow, she gave birth to the half-bull half-human Minotaur. Of course, the king was enraged and as punishment, Daedalus was forced to make an inescapable labyrinth, for the Minotaur. When it was completed, the king imprisoned Daedalus and his son Icarus on the top of the tallest tower, where they will stay for the rest of their lives. While Daedalus watched the birds, he found out how they would escape. He and Icarus would fly out of the tower. Using the feathers that fell from the flock into the tower, and the wax from candles, he made two pairs of giant win...
"Today I made an origami swan in was really nice" should be two sentences.
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What is wrong with this sentence: "here is the link I got to teach me how to make it"?